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"NINJA X SAMURAI"
By
MOOKKAMARA













email:amukamara44@gmail.com

FADE IN:
STORY TITLE: FORBIDIN LOVE
Story Synopsis: This is a story of love, hate, and deception. This story takes place in a futuristic japan. The land has been ravaged by war and was separated into many factions. The protagonist sarutobi daisuke is the nephew of the leader of the nobo samurai nation Ichaisuke Sarutobi the leader of this nation is called senbonatsater or senbon for short. He soon meets a girl named rin dashikai which is the daughter of general raikuu of the shikai moon mercenaries which have a long bloody history with daisuke's father. Both daisuke and rin are in training still. But an unknown enemy is in the works of changing the tides of the world to his favor. Daisuke is currently at the Boom street festival where the whole town celebrates the re-election of the previous senbon ICHAISUKE.
Dialogue of first nameu:
RANDOM GIRL: HEY, ISNT THAT DAISUKE SARUTOBI?

ACTION: A GROUP OF PRETTY GIRLS WALKING BY THE PARADE.
RANDOM GIRL'S FRIEND: YEAH THAT'S HIM ALRIGHT. DOESN'T HE LOOK SO SCARY.

ACTION: DAISUKE TURNS IMMDIATLEY TURNS AROUND AS HEOVER HEARS.
BOTH GIRLS: EEEEEEEEEKK!

DAISUKE THINKS TO HIM SELF: WHAT ARE THEY SO SCARED ABOUT. I DON'T BITE HAHA UNLESS THEY ASK ME TO. SIGHS WHY DO I GET SUCH A BAD REP IN THIS TOWN

ACTION: DAISUKE WALKS ALONG THE CROWD THE STREETS OF BOOM STREET thinking about his past
FLASH BACK:3 YEARS AGO:
DAISUKE IS STARTING HIS TRAINNG TO JOIN THE NOBU WARRIOR POLICE. HE SOON LEARNS HIS COUSIN IS ALSO TRAINING AS A WARRIOR TOO, SO HE CAN RAISE AMOUNG THE RANKS AND BECOME LEADER IKE HIS FATHER. THEY ARE CURRENTLY AT THE GLASS HOUSE WHERE TRAINEES FIGHT AND LEAR IN A GIANT GLASS BUBBLE

TRAINING INSTRUCTOR: OK THIS IS ONLY TRAINING YOU NEED TO LEARN RESTRAINT AND DICIPLINE!

DAISUKE: YES SIR!  

DAISUKE THINKING: OH MAN, EVEN THOUGH WE NEVER HAD A MACTH TOGETHER,I KNOW ICHIGO WAS ALWAYS KNOWN FOR HS QUCIK K.O.'S AND SUBMISSIONS NO WONDER WHY HE IS SO POPULLAR, EVERYONE RESPECTS HIM, EVEN I DO! BUT THIS TIMES DIFFERENT HE IS GOING AGAINST ME.


ICHIGO SARUTOBI: ALRIGHTY IM GONNA KNOCK THIS WHIIMP OUT!

ACTION: the training instructor goes to signal the beginning of the match, but before he can even react ichigo is at daisukes neck with a punch!

DAISUKE THINKING TO HIM SELF: OH NO WHY DOES HE ALWAYS DO THIS!
ACTION: daisuke reacts quickly enough to dodge ichigo's punch, and dashes backwards away from danger. the instructor is in ichigo's way so he violently pushes him away
ICHIGO: OUT OF THE WAY OLD MAN!
TRAINING INSTRUCTOR:AHHHHHHHHHHH!, OHHHFF..
ACTION: the instructor is stuck in the glass wall surrounding them

DAISUKE: ICHIGO! YOU CAN'T DO THAT!

ICHIGO: WHY NOT IT WOULDN'T BE FUN IF HE WERE TO RESTRAIN ME. NOW, LETS MOVE ON TO THE ASS WHOOPIN' I AM ABOUT TO GIVE YOU. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!

DAISUKE: ALIRGHT HAVE IT YOU'RE WAY!

ACTION: ichigo rushes towards daisuke in a dash off the ground, then quickly dashes to the left in a blink of an eye!
DAISUKE THINKING: WHERE THE HELL DID HE GO!
ACTION: ichigo appears right above daisuke's head
ICHIGO: IM RIGHT HERE..
ACTION: daisuke swings a devastating punch above him and connects.

ACTION: baaaaaaaaam! Ichigo goes flying into the glass wall and breaks it and keeps on going!

ICHIGO: OHHHHHHHHF!

DAISUKE:WHAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!?!

FADE OUT:
THE END

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violet-greenacre Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome to Future Manga Artists, I look forward to seeing any work that you submit, I hope you enjoy the group. :huggle:
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thank you and ill try =]
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violet-greenacre Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart: Don't feel obligated to submit any work and if you do decide to submit please do not rush your work.
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